Namine - Second Dates

Hello, this is Kiki, co-founder of #OtakuDreamers <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> just in case you were wondering who this was...
anyways, let's do this, shall we? <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

I like this idea of namine, the "fragile" girl actually being so violent. yandere <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/> ( the only reason i gave the vision a 4/5 is because the idea has been used before... *cough* higurashi *cough* ) otherwise though, i like the idea behind this.

your style is really good, it's really enjoyable. usually i see a very definite anime style for KH, but this is your own style that's set apart from the usual anime style.

technique: i love the high contrast caused by the white and black, and then the red adds to the picture. there's very little depth caused by shading/coloring techniques, yet by the way you've used pure black and white (i'm ignoring the red for now) it creates a dramatic effect. personally though, i feel like this piece is a little bit more on calmer side rather then the dramatic side (b/c there's a lot more white then black on namine's body, excluding the clothes). perhaps that's what you were going for, but i personally feel that more blood equals more drama (but again, this is one individual's opinion.
also, is there a wind blowing? her skirt and hair seems to say "yeah" but her necklaces don't seem to agree...

impact: as i've mentioned, there's a serene look to namine which fits her personality (as you've described her at least) very well, and you managed to give her a chainsaw and blood all over her (and pull it off very well!)

other: i feel like she should be pushed to the right a little more. it seems like you were going for the rule-of-thirds method of composition, but didn't completely pull it off. also, the big white space in between the arm and the chainsaw bothers me. it's completely enclosed, leaving a big gap. perhaps if you pulled the chainsaw in front of her body more, that way maybe you'll be able to relax that arm a little (if that was what you wanted) the flowers seem too cut-off, like there's something there. (obviously there is, but if you had another flower there that was closer to namine, say perhaps on that patch of blood somewhere, then i feel like that would create more... balance?)

overall, i really like this. again, i am in love with the limited colors and how well you've executed them. there are areas that can use improvement, but overall this is a wonderful piece that gives a wonderful horrible (horrible as in "horror" not "this sucks") twist to the world of KH <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>